the critique/suggestion i get most often for my posters is to break up the line layer. so i tried it out on the as220 printshop’s april poster (i do one a month, if you didn’t notice). so i have mixed feelings about the following but at least it’s a step toward a brighter (broader) poster future!

O P.S. don’t forget to notice my urine-colored bg plz&thnx.
ALSO i dropped my wallet in the toilet to day (accomplishment!)